ACT考試全稱“American College Test”，中文名稱為“美國大學入學考試”。

 

　　它是美國大學本科的入學條件之一，也是獎學金發(fā)放的重要依據(jù)之一，由ACT INC主辦。那我們具體來看一下act考試寫作如何突破8分，取得8分以上的成績。

 

　　下面是一篇范文，我們來分析一下它的優(yōu)點在哪里。
 

 

　　廚師、名人和許多餐館都在推廣健康食品。不過，那里仍然有很多垃圾食品連鎖店。我們應(yīng)該考慮為什么人們總是吃不健康的食物。

 

　　觀點一：健康食品通常是有機的和新鮮的。然而，它們不容易獲得，而且價格昂貴，這就是為什么人們選擇垃圾食品而不是健康食品。

 

　　觀點二，人們根據(jù)自己的文化選擇食物。他們不會根據(jù)食物的營養(yǎng)價值來選擇食物。因此，無論健康與否，他們都會繼續(xù)吃他們傳統(tǒng)上吃的食物。

 

　　觀點三：人們根據(jù)口味選擇食物。除非有人能生產(chǎn)出味道和垃圾食品一樣好的健康食品，否則人們會繼續(xù)吃垃圾食品

 

　　范文：

 

　　In today’s society,people cannot live without social medias that contain many influencers showing off their popular life styles.Young people are the community that follows the trend the most easily and absorb the popular culture as their own,which changed their social values and their development,considering they have the most time to spend on the internet and in front of television.Therefore,popular culture has the most influence on young people’s life.

 

　　Although in traditional view,parents are the people that play the most important roles in shaping their children’s identity because they shared the most quality time together,the situation has changed due to the popularization of social medias,which make young people spend more time apart from their family to explore online;therefore,children no longer spend the most time with their parents anymore.Moreover,school and part time jobs take up the rest of family times,which makes the time of parenting decreased,so students today have less chances to be guided by their parents and mimic their parents’acts,even though they live under the same roof.

 

　　Additionally,compared to parents,whose every single aspect is seen by their children,those public figures’negative sides always remain hidden,so teenagers are more likely to follow them voluntarily.It is known that the information the public received has been improved,and that is the reason why the celebrities always seem more attractive than common people,which promotes young people to follow the opinions led by them and chase after their behaviors.On the other hand,parents usually represent the daily image in our lives,so young people,who are at this certain age that want to experience excitement rather than being mediocre,do not look up to their parents as much as their idols.

 

　　Moreover,young people are the most likely to be influenced by the social trends since they always know the most convenient access from their peers or from internet.Knowing so,social medias developed various ways to capture young people’s attention,for example,Tiktok attracts young people by presenting easily made short videos that fits their personal taste;The media market developed so many platforms that students spent most their time on the medias after school,and since the public has its fixed value everywhere like being skinny and athletic is the only way to gain popularity,young people are influenced by it subconsciously,because they have not formed their independent and mature judgment and identity yet.

 

　　To put in a nutshell,young people today are more influenced by the medias and their idols of the popular culture more than by their parents,because the social medias and internet platforms have taken up too much of their time that they no longer have the time with their families for their parents,and they are more willing to follow the trend set by their idols.

 

　　我們可以看到這篇文章的思路是非常清晰的，在四個評分標準上都能完成的很好：

 

　　To effectively address the topic or task；Well-organized and developed,using clearly and appropriate explanations,exemplifications and/or details；To display unity,progression and coherence；To display consistent facility in the use of language.

 

　　因此最后也能夠取得很好的分數(shù)。關(guān)于考試和出國留學的任何問題，歡迎咨詢我們A加未來的老師們，我們很樂意解答大家的問題。